Mentor Monday: Lisa Wheeler

I crossed my fingers when I asked Lisa if she would consider being interviewed for this blog series. I know she’s talented, wise, and proficient – that’s obvious from her body of work in the children’s book industry — but I didn’t know where she stood on mentoring. Lisa has professionally critiqued three of my picture book manuscripts (one sold so far!) and I viewed her critiques as more insightful and valuable than expected. In addition to receiving a critique on a particular manuscript, I felt I had been mentored. This lead me to ask Lisa for her thoughts on the subject. You may be surprised by who she would choose as a mentor…

Visit Lisa’s website at www.lisawheelerbooks.com.  

Please share a brief bio of you and your work.
Lisa Wheeler is passionate about children’s books. “I love everything about them, including the smell.” To date, Lisa has thirty titles on library shelves, with more to follow over the next few years. She’s written picture books in prose and rhyme, an easy reader series, three books of poems, and creative nonfiction for the very young.

Awards include the 2004 Mitten Award for Old Cricket, given by the Michigan Library Association, the 2005/06 Great Lakes, Great Books Award and 2005 Missouri Building Blocks Award for Bubble Gum, Bubble Gum, the 2006 Bluebonnet Award for Seadogs , the 2006/07 South Carolina Picture Book Award for Bubble Gum, Bubble Gum and most recently, the 2008 The Theodor Seuss Geisel Award for Jazz Baby given by the American Library Association.

Her newest titles include Spinster Goose: Twisted Rhymes for Naughty Children, illustrated by Sophie Blackall (Simon & Schuster)and Dino-Basketball, illustrated by Barry Gott (CarolRhoda),

Lisa shares her Michigan home with one husband, one dog, and an assortment of anthropomorphic characters.

What value do you feel mentoring brings to a writer and the writing community?
First off, I think of mentorship as being three different levels. 

Level 1: Books. An author writes a fabulous book and when you read it, you are inspired to write one. Or the book is so well written, you want to emulate the author. Is this true mentorship? I don’t know. But there is a whole host of writers that I have learned from just by reading their excellent works.

 Level 2: Critiques. You may have a critique partner or group that has opened your eyes to not only the wrong things in your manuscript, but also the good stuff. Your critique partner has helped you become a better writer and you know that their help has been invaluable.

Level 3: Mentorship. This is a true one-on-one relationship with an accomplished writer. This person has helped you shape your writing and has also helped you maneuver through this crazy business.

 I think that all three levels are important. It is unrealistic to think that every new writer can be mentored by an accomplished author, so I encourage everyone to try for Level 1 and 2. I have learned so much from critique groups and published works. I think they are the backbone of our industry and fill in very nicely when one doesn’t have the luxury of a one-on-one mentorship.

Have you ever been officially mentored (through an SCBWI, educational, or community-based program)? If so, please describe the situation and outcome.
No, I have never been officially mentored. But back when I was starting out, I was fortunate enough to find an awesome online critique group. Author Verla Kay was in charge of all us newbies and in time, nearly every member became published. In this group I met the very talented Linda Smith (Mrs. Biddlebox, The Inside Tree, Mrs. Crump’s Cat) and she and I became not only one-on-one critique partners, but also formed a lovely friendship. Her skills were beyond mine and she encouraged me to try bigger, better things. I do think of her as a mentor.

Have you ever officially mentored a writer? (through an SCBWI, university, or community program) If so, please describe the situation and outcome.
No. I have never officially mentored anyone. But I am happy to say that I have done hundreds of critiques over the years and have been fortunate enough to see some of those manuscripts go on to publication. I have taught workshops (Picture Book Boot Camp) and am thrilled whenever I get an email from students who say they “get it” now. I have developed friendships with many of the writers I have critiqued or taught and feel an overwhelming sense of pride in their accomplishments.

What strengths would you/do you bring as a mentor?
I know picture books. I can tell when they are and aren’t working. It is much easier for me to see what is not working in someone else’s manuscripts than in my own. I try to teach writers when I critique their manuscripts so that when they revise—or write a new picture book—they will not repeat errors. My strength lies in my ability to convey How To advice concerning picture book writing in a simple, concise and clear way. I love teaching what I’ve learned along the way.

If you could mentor any writer throughout time, who would it be and why?
This one really stumps me. I can’t think of anyone. But if I did have to mentor someone throughout time, I suppose it would be some very wordy novelist because it would be fun to teach them to write tight.

If you could be mentored by any writer throughout time, who would it be and why?
After some thought, I decided it would be Jim Henson. I think he was truly a genius and brought puppets to life in a wonderful way. I would’ve loved to have learned from this master of his craft.

Thank you, Lisa!

Publisher’s Weekly Discount for SCBWI Members

Have you heard about this valuable perk from SCBWI and Publisher’s Weekly? Members can subscribe to PW for $99/year ($150 discount!). I find the weekly print magazine to be very helpful if there is room in the budget for it. Here is the info:

SCBWI has partnered with Publishers Weekly to offer a significant discount to our members. SCBWI members can get a full year’s subscription to PW for $99—that’s $150 off the non-member price!
This includes:
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SCBWI members who do not want a full subscription to PW can opt to receive just the Spring 2012 and Fall 2012 special Children’s Announcement issues from PW for $25, with no additional shipping cost.
Here is the link to SCBWI to get you started:  http://www.scbwi.org/Default.aspx

Puppy Breath #3

Q: What do bubble wrap bubbles, pieces of an empty toilet paper roll, and a rubber band from a teenager’s braces have in common?  
A: Items that do not digest in puppy bellies. Need I say more? 

Caution: Horn Tooting

When Laura Backes, publisher of Children’s Book Insider (CBI) Newsletter, co-founder of the popular CBI Clubhouse website, former editor at several houses including Farrar, Straus and Giroux, and current freelance editor asked if I’d be interested in doing an interview for an article spotlighting CBI members with debut picture books, I calmly typed, “Sure. I think I could do that” and then screeched a little bit.  Laura professionally critiqued two of my early manuscripts (oh, how embarrassing) and I’ve always admired her style. The interview and full article in the December 2011 issue can be seen here: http://cbiclubhouse.com/.

This website and CBI Newsletter are incredible resources for people in the children’s book community and I encourage you to check them out and sign up.  Quickly.

Mentoring Goes National!

January is National Mentor Month!  (Insert fanfare!) Do you know someone who could benefit from your talent and/or experience? Remember my mantra? Everyone has something to give, even if they are new to the world of children’s book writing.   Let’s celebrate by visiting the official website for National Mentor Month at http://www.nationalmentoringmonth.org/about_nmm/, making a decision to mentor someone somehow, and telling me about it at carrieapear@aol.com. Just type, “I’m a new mentor/mentee” in the subject line. I’ll tally the number of new mentor relationships that are born and report on their progress in this blog. 

I’ll go first. I’ve just begun mentoring a totally cool lady in Marquette who among other amazing things, has skiied to the Geographic North Pole and Antartica. She’s ready to tell her stories to children and needs help getting started. One thing I know for sure? This relationship will be an adventure for me. 

Now…Rev your engines and start mentoring!!

Mentor Monday on a Tuesday: The Art of Receiving Critiques

As part of the Mentor Monday series, I wanted to talk about receiving critiques. Yes, it is hard to give effective critiques (which is a topic for another Mentor Monday) but it can be just as difficult/confusing/frustrating to receive them.

If the critique is positive, you might think: 
Did the reviewer spend enough time with the manuscript? Did she/he miss or gloss over the real problems?
Maybe he/she doesn’t want to hurt my feelings by saying the real truth about it?
Does the reviewer have enough experience/industry knowledge to know if it is technically well-written? Sellable? Appropriate for the intended market?
(It couldn’t be that the manuscript is actually good, for gosh sakes).

If the critique is not positive, you might think:
Did the reviewer spend enough time with the manuscript? Did she/he miss the Newbery goodness of it all due to lack of sleep or their own distractions?
Is professional jealousy an issue? (dare I say it?) 
Is this a reviewer who feels negative comments are necessary for my growth? Or just feels he/she needs to say something negative…
Maybe the reviewer is reacting to something other than the writing — the genre or style, perhaps? (The problem couldn’t be the writing. Heck, no. Not the writing.)

Either way,  you might think:
How much can I rely on this feedback and use it to move the manuscript to the next level?
What do I take from the critique and what do I leave? (This is an important decision whether the reviewers are in the same stage of writing and being published as you or further along. ) 

How do you respond to critiques? A colleague shared her typical reaction:   
1) Denial.
2) Avoidance.
3) Denial.
4) Grudging admission that my colleague’s comments may offer valuable insights.
5) SLOW percolation of ideas.
6) Aha moment.
7) Revision (and significant improvement, thanks to those insightful critiques).
8) Gratitude for everyone’s patience.

Ah, yes. Patiece with the process is key. That’s my take home point for today.  What’s yours?

Puppy Breath #2: Can you say “sassy?”

How can a 59 day old, 5 pound creature rule the world? (Or at least our household.) Mix one part Tasmanian devil, one part Olympic pace sprinter, and one part manic chewing machine with razor sharp teeth and you get KONA – a minilabradoodle force to reckon with. Be afraid. 

Puppy Breath #1

If I’m never heard of again in the writing world, it is because Santa brought a puppy to our house on Christmas morning. What was Santa thinking?

Mentor Monday: Andy from Austin Sherrod

I’ve found ANOTHER friendly and helpful person from Austin:  Andy Sherrod.  He’s shared his insights on being a mentor and a mentee and offers his take on editorial feedback.  Andy is also a go-to guy on the issue of boys’ aliteracy. Even more information about Andy as a writer, writing coach, and public speaker can be found on his website:  http://www.andysherrod.com/Home.php.
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Andy, please share a brief bio of you and your work. 

I came to writing late, 1999 to be exact, when I turned 40.  I write for middle grade and most of that is historical fiction.  The intent of my writing is to take boys back in time to experience history.  I speak to groups about boys’ aversion to volunteer reading and cite research that identifies the literary components of a good boy book.  I hold an MFA in Writing for Children and Young Adults from Vermont College of Fine Arts and I wrote my thesis on boys’ aliteracy. 


Why did you decide to become a mentor?

Pure and simple, I love to teach.

How many writers have you officially mentored?

Mentoring is different than just offering a critique, and I’ve done a lot of that.  So really I’ve only officially mentored one person through the Austin Mentoring Program.  But beyond that, I’ve mentored one other.

What strengths do you bring as a mentor?

Because I love to teach, I think I’m patient with people.  That said, I feel I must tell a writer exactly what I see in their manuscripts that need improvement but I can do so in an encouraging fashion.  My philosophy is that anyone who is serious about writing can take a strong critique.  Only pointing out those aspects of a manuscript that are working doesn’t help a writer improve one bit.  Serious writers want serious critiques.  So I give it to them.

Have you been a mentee? If so, what from that experience helps you be the best mentor you can be?

For the two years I studied at Vermont College I was mentored by four fabulous writers.  Uma Krishnaswami, Ellen Howard, Sarah Ellis, and Marion Dane Bauer.  From them I received incredible support for what I was doing well and firm admonition to improve.  I have striven to carry that balance into my own mentoring relationships.

If you could mentor any writer throughout time, who would it be and why?

What a great question!  I can think of a host of writers I’d like to be mentored by but the one I think I’d like to actually mentor would be G.A. Henty.  Henty wrote over one hundred historical novels for boys.  His story line seldom changed.  His boy protagonists could have been all the same kid only the name and time in history were changed.  He is a great writer and I would recommend his books to anyone but I think I could have helped him a little with variety.

If you could be mentored by any writer throughout time, who would it be and why?

There are so many writers whose work I admire.  Gary Paulsen is my hero.  Gary Schmidt is brilliant.  But I think I’d like to be mentored by C.S. Lewis.  Lewis’s strong Christian faith pervades his work without overwhelming it.  I like that.

Mentor Monday: Kristin Wolden Nitz (currently mentoring Melissa Shanker!)

I thought it would be fun to hear from Melissa Shanker’s mentor, Kristin Wolden Nitz. Kristin took time out of a tight deadline to answer our questions about mentoring and how important the process has been to her and her writing. She can be found at http://www.kwnitz.com/.  Thanks, Kristin! 

Please share a brief bio of you and your work.

I’ve always written the books that I wanted to read.  That might explain why my credits include a young middle grade contemporary fantasy (SAVING THE GRIFFIN), upper middle grade sports novel (DEFENDING IRENE) and YA mystery (SUSPECT).  My husband and I have moved thirteen or fourteen times since we graduated from Michigan Tech. Currently, we’re in the middle of preparing for our third move to Missouri. 

Why did you decide to become a mentor?

When I heard that the (SCBWI-MI) mentorship was going to be a novel in the next year, I offered to serve as one of the judges. When a friend on Ad-Com asked me if I’d actually BE the mentor it was hard to say no!

How many writers have you officially mentored?

Other than Melissa, I’ve also officially mentored Debra McArthur. She won the Missouri mentorship back in 2003 or 2004.  Unofficially, I’ve offered a lot of encouragement to a number of talented writers.  I also teach for the Institute of Children’s Literature in their beginners and book course.  Often, I feel more like I’m mentoring the novel students rather than overtly teaching them.

Were you part of the decision process for choosing Melissa Shanker as the SCBWI-MI Mentor Award? If so, what about her work made it rise to the top?

Yes.  I had my choice of the top three writers as chosen by the other judges. I bonded with Melissa’s characters almost immediately.  They seemed very real to me.  At the same time, she brought some serious tension to her project.

What strengths do you bring as a mentor?

Well, I have a zeal for making sure that there’s enough conflict and tension in a project since that used to be one of my weaknesses. I also have a pretty good understanding of layering in subplots so that they all come together in a coherent and dramatic way. Finally, I really want to see talented writers succeed.  For that reason, I really have an enthusiasm for nurturing and encouraging them.   

Have you been a mentee? If so, what from that experience helps you be the best mentor you can be?

My writing life changed dramatically when I won a mentorship with noted children’s author Gary L. Blackwood back in 1999.  He helped me understand the importance of conflict in novels.  I would often try to smooth things over for my characters.  Problems would stop before they got started.   I can never pay Gary back.  This is the kind of debt that you can only pay forward.  (Award-winning science fiction author Robert Heinlein came up with this idea decades ago.)

If you could mentor any writer throughout time, who would it be and why?

Megan Whalen Turner.  Then I could find out what happens next in her Attolia books

If you could be mentored by any writer throughout time, who would it be and why?

As much as I adore writers like Charlotte Bronte and Jane Austen, they probably wouldn’t be that much help in dealing with current issues in writing.  That’s why I’d have to go with either Lois McMaster Bujold or Elizabeth Peters.  They’re both delightful, generous writers who went through tough times before achieving success.